Tuesday 20 December 2016

War and Peace, Gob Squad, The Coopers Malthouse, Merlyn Theatre, Melbourne Festival, Sunday October 30th 2016.

War and Peace, Gob Squad, The Coopers Malthouse, Merlyn Theatre, Melbourne, Melbourne Festival, Sunday October 30th 2016.


"War and Peace", has been adapted to the stage by Gob Squad from Leo Tolstoys' famous thick book and was presented at The Coopers Malthouse, Merlyn Theatre for the Melbourne Festival (which was also their final show) on Sunday October 30th 2016.

For those new to my blog I write about the holistic experience of attending the theatre. I buy my own tickets. So if you want a re-telling of the story please refer to the links for further information or for further insights.  Note, that I may provide different links for repeated main words or phrases.  I write for my memories of what I have seen, and is more of a stream of consciousness.

As per the Melbourne Festival brochure the show is described as "A never ending parade of characters dance, dine and duel while performers prepares for scenes as if going into battle, all in order to re-frame Tolstoy's central inquiry:  can we live a moral life in an imperfect world?  Are our peaceful lives themselves in a kind of warfare?"  

I have seen Gob Squad's work on at least two previous occasions and knew that I was to be stretched emotionally and theatrically.  Other people who I met during the festival had seen the show and hated it; and so my expectations were lowered, but I was willing to see it for myself.

I am so pleased I did.  "War and Peace" by Gob Squad is not everyone's cup of tea.  "War and Peace" is a thought provoking piece of theatre and meets the above description thoroughly. My partner and I have not read Tolstoy's book though we have seen a BBC mini-series twice and also watched the 1966 movie years ago.  So we had a basic idea of the story, characters and themes.   Gob Squad captured the themes and some of the major events mentioned in Tolstoy's mammoth book.  

The show has a dubious starting time.  We were admitted into the theatre about five minutes late.  So maybe the show started at this moment.  Or did it start at about 4.50 pm when three of the actors came into the foyer with their spiral-note-books to talk with patrons?  Either way the show did not really get under way until about 5.15 pm. 

Set Design is by the ingenious and inventive Romy Kiesling.  The actors interviewed the guests at their table during different times throughout the show.  The camera was pivoted to change the focus as each guest was interviewed and projected onto two screens on either side of the open stage. Upstage was a portable tent with netting for curtains.  Inside two camera were positioned: from the upstage-right and downstage-left corners of the tent.

Video Design by Miles Chalcraft and Anna Zett  provides the audience with so many perspectives.  

Costume Design by Ingken Benesch is clever and confronting in a fun sort of way.  Her designs expose the legs and crotches of the actors in a fun but not pornographic way.  Her designs for the fashion parades entice us into the absurd world of fashion mixed up with historical references on steroids.  The oak trees, birch trees and camouflage costumes reminded me of the forest trees en pointe from the Snow White sequence in "Disney on Parade" about 1971/72.

The actors discuss the salon:  What is a salon? Have you ever been in a salon?  How do you behave in a salon?  Do you cry and sulk in a corner?  We are introduced to a French phrase to save us from any arguments.

Tatiana Saphir asked us to consider the sword from Napoleonic times with a 114 marking, while Sharon Smith showed us the heavy book "War and Peace" by Tolstoy.  The sword represented fact while the book represented fiction, and both were separated by the tent central on stage.

A discussion led by Simon Will with his guest shared their common history - education at school. Both had learnt English history and Simon said his history education had skipped over Colonial history. This raises the question about learning facts and linear history compared to concepts and themes. This links into the question for the audience: were they expecting a retelling of the book or prepared to enter the philosophical presentation about the themes, concepts and issues that Tolstoy raises in his book?  Can we ever know all history?

One actor asked us to extend our left arm and then to put our index and middle finger from our right hand on the left wrist to feel our pulse.   The audience did so and then were asked to count their pulse out aloud.  The timing went on for about 40 seconds and the theatre was full of various versions of their pulse being counted.  This was a lovely piece of audience participation that highlighted our individuality and our mortality.  The audience counting their heart beats was like a collective battlefield of dying soldiers or the anticipation of entering battle.  The actor asked whether your pulse was higher than a given figure.  Again this question may have raised the stress levels for some audience members.  It was a great moment of personal reflection on our individual health.

I loved the other part of the audience participation to remember our history as the 18 or 19th performance in Melbourne.  The actor asked us to say "it" (as the word was the 18th or 19th word from a part of the book.  I am not sure if she said it was from the final paragraph of Tolstoy's book?). We rehearsed all saying "it" together and then Sharon Smith conducted the sound recording. Someone up the back squealed the word "it" at a high pitch.  Sharon Smith made a great remark "I've been sound bombed" in reference to the social media practise of a stranger spoiling a photo by doing something to invade the space of those in the photo.  This sound bomb is a part of the history of this show.  Wow this links in the memory of history depicted from the show too.

The show gave us snippets from the book but more importantly drew our attention to history and remembrance.  We saw pictures from history depicting major events.  We subconsciously question the accuracy of these paintings by considering other questions.  The guests were asked how they were exposed through the media and social networking to war.

Sharon Smith asks her guest if she would slap her.  Her guest said no but it could happen potentially if she was provoked.  Sharon Smith asked if she would kiss her.  Then Sharon Smith said "kiss me on the lips."  The lady said "your lips are sweet".  We are introduced to so much richness in this simple sequence: with the slap representing - war and the kiss - peace.  We are also introduced subtly to the concept of "kiss and make-up' or even "kiss and tell" or "pillow talk".

One lady was asked whether we live in a time of war or peace.  Sharon Smith asked her "who would potentially declare war on Australia?"  China and Indonesia were discussed as examples.  New Zealand is scoffed as an example to make light of the serious and thought provoking moment.

Simon Will played or pretended to play a harp at one stage and sang John Lennon's "Imagine".  We had an opportunity to contemplate peace.  What is peace?  Are we at peace?   One actor talked about the content of the next verse.

A fashion parade was shown in two sections with various clothing featured to depict the various characters from Tolstoy's book.  Each actor modelled various fashion items depicting both a modern twist incorporated with the characters.

We were introduced to Lenin and Tolstoy.  They kissed. What does a kiss represent: a welcome, a seduction, a comfort or reconciliation?  Is a kiss a sign of making up?

The second fashion show depicted famous people throughout history.   A Disney style character, Donald Trump, Marilyn Monroe etc.

There was a discussion by Simon Will with his guest about what shape or image would depict or describe something as powerful.  The guest said a line could not describe it.  I sadly cannot remember all of the details of this discussion but it links to the final images of the snow and fog writing a story or history.    There is so much richness in this work - the snow and the cold depicted in the book/movie/BBC mini series versions of "War and Peace".  The fog illustrated the blur, or not being able to see clearly in war but also for us to be able to see history clearly.

We are living in an historic time.  How would we describe this time?  History is written or remembered after the event.  Maybe that is why the images of "One Direction" and the boy band poses emphasised the "Instagram" and social media interaction to record history as it is happening.  Social media seems to have a focus on creating history and remembering those meals and these "selfie" moments.

At one stage Sharon Smith performs a Tolstoy dance with a rhythmic gymnastic ribbon.  It is a terrific example of the Olympics and the competitive nature of sports, plus the ridiculousness of this style of dance.  These competitions are examples of war and competitiveness - with a winner receiving the Gold Medal, runners up and the losers.  We can consider: who are the real winners? Who are the cheats?  What would you do to win?

I loved when Simon Will entered as Pierre.  His timing was poor as he interrupted Sharon Smith. This awkward moment recreated some great moments from the mini-series where Pierre's timing appeared at odds with others.

I adored the section where the three actors appeared as different versions of Pierre with his glasses. It was as if they were auditioning for the role.  The confused or smiling Pierre etc.  The guests even donned the Pierre round glasses.  Were they also sublimely having an eye/fitness test to enter the military?  Were they competing for their social status or their intelligence test?  Were they displaying their physical disability? Or were the glasses showing their vulnerability - "would you hit someone wearing glasses?"  This simple sequence stirred up so many emotions.

I loved the use of the cameras and the close ups of actors or guests. At times the camera would capture another actor off guard to create some light relief. The close up of the two bottles of Vodka and French Brandy was a great image of Russian and French conflict.

 The tent was used as a preparation area or a neutral zone at times.  Inside the tent were two cameras providing us with alternative angles to provide us with alternative versions of history.

To me the modern day version of "War and Peace" is self imposed technology, mobile phone and social media addiction.  A new disease is "Fear of missing out" and I was so pleasantly surprised that this show did not have any mobile phone distractions.  Whether patrons liked the show or not, there was a wonderful peace as we had no mobile phone distractions throughout the show.   This was the most peaceful of all Melbourne Festival offerings and highlighted the need to find peace in this performance and not be disturbed. This audience wanted to be entertained and not to be "distracted".  They did not want to be at war with outside distractions.  This "peace" was within and showed respect to these fine artists and to other patrons.

Sharon Smith asked her guest "What do you do to distract yourself?"  The lady mentioned reading and movement.  This linked to the themes of indulgence and distracting oneself from war or from your own troubles.  A video and stills of cats and dogs was shown to demonstrate a common distraction for people.  It also highlighted the sense of an animal living in the moment and being, rather than living in the stressful past or future of our minds.

The image of walking into Tolstoy's head was sensational.  We then saw the images from inside the tent: as if we were inside Tolstoy's brain.  Where did Tolstoy develop his motivation and sense for this story?  It was so clever and so simple.

The final image of the oak tree among the birches was haunting as the actor described how the old oak tree had witnessed so much history.

The cast led the guests to look to the sky on the main screen.  The lady with her guest held her left arm extended and the right hand talking her pulse.  I did the same as I remembered our earlier audience participation.  About a minute later the cast all started counting their pulse.  Beautiful and pulsating with our blood running through our veins, as there was so much blood spilled on the battlefields.  This was a powerfully kinaesthetic and visceral image than we could sense.

There were some lovely quotes during the show that I now struggle to remember.  I savour the image and the feeling of being disturbed and confronted in a safe environment.  

Sadly about six patrons walked out during the show.  I noticed each time when patrons walked out was during or just after examples with a predictable bias. Maybe some of these audience members thought the discussions were too preachy.  Applause at times overshadowed what some of the guests were saying and I wanted to hear their contributions.  The applause recognised some ideas which are parochial and can be politically divisive.  The applause was predictably to demonstrate their public acceptance of these causes. Cool - I get it.  But what about those people who have different opinions and ideas?  I would have loved to have seen a performance where their views were contrary to many of the audience.  To me finding the similarities in differences was more important. There was a sequence about having discussions with friends and family about sensitive topics like politics, religion or war etc.

Maybe I am at war with myself for not remembering the details of this wonderful experience. Though I can confidently say that I am more at peace with myself for having had this experience, and, to be able to savour "War and Peace" by Gob Squad for years to come.

I think this is my favourite work by Gob Squad and I was so pleasantly surprised at how accessible this philosophical approach worked.  It is a show that I could see again and I am now tempted to read the book.

"War and Peace" adaptation by Gob Squad received an 8/10 from me while my partner surprisingly gave it a 9/10.

The Light In The Piazza, Life Like Company, Playhouse Theatre, Arts Centre Melbourne, Friday November 4th 2016

The Light In The Piazza, Life Like Company, Playhouse Theatre, Arts Centre Melbourne, Friday November 4th 2016


"The Light In The Piazza" was presented by Life Like Company at the Playhouse Theatre, Arts Centre Melbourne on Friday November 4th 2016


For those new to my blog I write about the holistic experience of attending the theatre. I buy my own tickets. So if you want a re-telling of the story please refer to the links for further information or for further insights.  Note, that I may provide different links for repeated main words or phrases.  I write for my memories of what I have seen, and is more of a stream of consciousness.

The pre-show announcement was in Italian and was fun but with a serious message for patrons to show restraint and respect. Thankfully no mobile phone distractions occurred during the show - which is sadly a rare event.

"The Light In The Piazza" had great singing, acting and costumes.  The relationships between the characters seemed connected and the actors seemed to be listening to affect each other.  These fine performers transported us on a journey of intrigue, hope, and love.

The opening and closing tableau were strong by capturing each character's essence and their intertwining relationships.

Set Design by Tom Willis was simple and effective with the raised stage, paintings and a few movable set pieces.  However, a ramp or two could have been incorporated to make a more seamless production.  The use of the paintings flying in and out created an instant image of Italy.

The staging was fair, though it was a bit clunky at times due to the raised central area.  For example, the flow was broken when the pram or bicycle had to lifted on and off the raised area.  The raised stairway was also a bit problematic.

Lighting Design also by Tom Willis varied in the qualities of the various atmospheres and sense of locations.  It needed more finesse or sharpness to define locations.  There were some lost opportunities to melt into the next scene in accord with the sumptuous score.

The best aspect of the lighting showed the development of the story from Clara's innocence to the confusion of when she loses her way.  It was as if the lighting was showing us her neurological pathways and confusion.

Some of the set/scene changes were very clunky from a stage management perspective and needed to flow more with the quality of the score.  We needed to be swept away from scene to scene - rather than be jolted around like a turbulent flight.

Sadly the cross was not in the final scene corresponding to an earlier scene in the church.  I appreciate we saw a different perspective of the church, but it would have given the scene a visual polish.

Director, Theresa Borg has amassed an amazing cast and honoured this beautiful score by Craig Lucas and Adam Guetel   Theresa Borg has created a a realistic version of this at-times-heart-wrenching story.  The relationships with each of the characters seemed honest and real compared with another production of this musical.

Musical Director, Vanessa Scammell has soared with the cast's magnificent singing and luscious harmonies.

Chelsea Plumley is too visually too young for the role of the mother, Margaret Johnson.  Take that as a compliment as she is a tour de force in creating a believable character with her sumptuous and strong singing and honesty in her acting.  Chelsea Plumley was terrific and showed enormous restraint in not revealing her daughter Clara's impairment.  She could have played the mother as obsessively caring, but instead gave us a richly concerned character of depth.

Genevieve Kingsford's Clara was sensational, as she played the daughter exquisitely with her restraint and hints of impairment.  She gave us a beautifully considered performance with a lovely range of texture in her emotions - including innocence, determination, wonderment and exploration.

Jonathon Hickey as Fabrizio Naccarelli was also sensational as masculinity personified as this quintessential romantic Italian.  What a voice!  What an actor!  I cannot wait to see him again.

Josh Piterman as the sparring husband Giuseppe Nacarelli was also terrific.  So much great talent.  He was especially effective in his sparring scenes with his wife Franca Nacarelli played by Madison Green.   The Octet in Act Two is a highlight and contained the requisite tensions between each character.

There were some sound issues in the opening as Chelsea Plumley's levels were wrong and it took at least one minute to correct the balance.  With such a short season they are rushed to technically perfect their shows.

Roy Johnston the husband of Margaret was played ably by the ever reliable Jeremy Stamford.  Him dragging the golf clubs on as a prop were a bit much as the Argyle jumper would have sufficed and given us enough of a hint for the father's phone call scene.

Great timing was displayed in the first international phone call between Margaret Johnson and her husband, Roy.  They created us with a little light relief in the time lapses that further added to the drama of the story.

Costumes by Kim Bishop paid tribute to the 1950's elegance with his stylish designs.  Wigs and Hair Design by Corrine Day showcased her inimitable talent.

I particularly liked the haunting historical figures as if they were ghosts overseeing proceedings or as caretakers of the story.

Choreography by Jo-Anne Robinson was not as forced as in another production.  Her choreography melted into the show without being an add-on distraction.

Life Like Company have a reputation for showcasing excellent talent and great shows and I look forward to seeing more of their work in the future.

Singing wise this is my favourite production of the year.  Sadly some of the staging reflected in my overall rating of this production.

This is easily one of the musical highlights for 2016.

Overall "The Light In The Piazza"  obtained a 8/10.

PS  I wrote this review on December 21st from my notes and sadly cannot elaborate more on some of the other sensational performances.  

Sunday 18 December 2016

The Color Purple, Stage Art, Chapel Off Chapel, Thursday October 27th 2016

The Color Purple, Stage Art, Chapel Off Chapel, Thursday October 27th 2016



"The Color Purple" was performed by Stage Art, at Chapel Off Chapel, on Thursday October 27th 2016.

For those new to my blog I write about the holistic experience of attending the theatre. I buy my own tickets. So if you want a re-telling of the story please refer to the links for further information or for further insights.  Note, that I may provide different links for repeated main words or phrases.  I write for my memories of what I have seen, and is more of a stream of consciousness.

"The Color Purple" is very in-your-face and didactic with its message.

Director and designer, Robbie Carmelletti has done a fine job in the staging of "The Color Purple"for Stage Art.  He uses simple and basic sets to maximise the flexibility of our imagination to be transported to various locations.

He used good segues and transitions between scenes, though two scene transitions could have been tightened or sped up as they were too laboured.  The simple set design of a central raised stage area and eight benches were used creatively throughout.  He is confident that his vision of a show is in accord with designs.

Singing wise I thought there was too much screaming by one singer.

My favourite part was the delivery of the mail by Nettie as it was staged and performed with the requisite honour and reverence.

Lighting by Jason Bovaird and Maddy Seach was effective and sharp to give focus and to differentiate various locations or scenes.

Costume designs by Rhiannon Irving were serviceable but looked like a school production at times.   The costumes lacked realism for any of the hardships faced by the working characters.

Choreography by Jayden Hicks was appropriate though it was a bit off putting watching some performers checking their marks.

The man sitting next to us applauded politely during Act One and did not return for Act Two. 

There were three empty seats in E Row.  This is a prime location and further back you miss out on the front of the stage as most shows stage it too close to the front row and you cannot see the downstage action properly.

Some of the acting was terrific and at other times it was ordinary.  The acting was most effective when the actors really listened to each other and showed us their relationship or connection.

The moment when Celie played by Jayme-Lee Hanekom announces about the letters and the revelation of her children are alive - there is no reaction or minimal listening from the ensemble.  Did the ensemble hear the news?

I liked the show at times.

The three women were like the female chorus from "A Music Man" and were channelling the gossip song of "Pick A Little Talk A Little".

My favourite aspect was the sincerity of Celie played by Jayme-Lee Hanekom and her relationship with Nettie played admirably by Anna Francesca Armenia.

Iopu Auva'a played Harpo as a consistently weak man. I look forward to seeing him in the future.

James Ao did a good job but could have differentiated each of the three characters as the Preacher, Bobby and Buster more physically and vocally.  He is someone to watch in the future to reach his potential.

Pa and Ole Mister were dual roles played by Augustin Tchantcho both with variations of menace, manipulation and bullying tactic.

Musical Direction by Caleb Garfinkel had the band playing well while the singing was inconsistent. Sadly not one song was completely sung in tune.  The harmonies could have been rich if they were all in tune.

It was a pleasant shock that no mobile phone incidents occurred during this performance.  Though, one was nearly close with two patrons turning off their phones as the lights rose on the stage.

Overall this production of "The Color Purple" obtains a 7/10.  This is lucky as my partner hated the show and gave it 5/10.

Blaque Showgirls, Merlyn Theatre, Malthouse Theatre, Thursday December 1st 2016

"Blaque Showgirls", Merlyn Theatre, Malthouse Theatre, Thursday December 1st 2016


"Blaque Showgirls", Merlyn Theatre, Malthouse Theatre, Thursday December 1st 2016


For those new to my blog I write about the holistic experience of attending the theatre. I buy my own tickets. So if you want a re-telling of the story please refer to the links for further information or for further insights.  Note, that I may provide different links for repeated main words or phrases.  I write for my memories of what I have seen, and is more of a stream of consciousness.

Who would believe that in one week you would see two show with cut out sets and props?  Let alone seeing two shows in a week with a cut out rickshaw crossing the stage?  "Blaque Showgirls" did as did "Reefer Madness" at Chapel Off Chapel.


"Blaque Showgirls" was a fun satirical show though it felt like a Year 12 Drama project at times.

The most compelling part of the show was the various aspects of racial discrimination, indigenous and identity issues.  It was less didactic than I expected as it provided various perspectives.  The core to me that was most revealing was Ginny Jones (Bessie Holland) yearning to find a place in the world and the extent at which she was prepared to go for her own gain.

The cast of four worked well together, though the Stage Manager and Assistant Stage Manager deserved to be a part of the final curtain call - as they were so much a part of the action.  To me this was discriminatory that they were not acknowledged.  For example the blank stare of Matilda Woodroofe, the Assistant Stage Manager when holding the hat with wig attached was one of the funniest moments in the show.  The pause was magic.

Guy Simon played the dual roles Kyle MacLachlan and True Love Interest.  He played his parts with sincerity that made it funnier.  His first scene at the beach as True Love Interest was very funny and he had a true connection with Ginny Jones.  It was not hammy but these actors found a truth within their characters to play the moment of connection with honesty.  He did not play a caricatures but larger than life characters and therefore made it funnier in setting up jokes.

In fact with all of the four actors they played with sincerity as larger than life characters.  This level of sincerity and connection with characters is what was missing with "Reefer Madness".

Elaine Crombie as Chandon Connors and Auntie differentiated between the two characters.

Emi Canavan as Molly the Japanese girl with a dream brought a realism to the humour and made her journey more poignant.

Each character was used in some way by Ginny for her own gain to find her sense of identity.  At one time it reminded me of "Go Set A Watchman" by Harper Lee when many readers were disappointed by some revelations about Atticus Finch.  Here we find Ginny was disappointed to find out her heritage.

Direction by Sarah Giles worked the script by Nakkiah Lui to maximise the humour and tell the story. The connection between Ginny and Auntie seemed real and made even funnier.  Sarah has made the actors find an inner truth to their larger than life characters.  The actors were also listening to, and being present for one another that made it funny.  There were a few holes in the production that could have been tightened to make the production slicker.  This was mainly to do with the transitions between scenes and some of the set changes.  The white balloons at the end looked re-used, deflated and tired, which gave it a sloppy look.

The show channels John Waters trash film genre.  I was waiting for the Egg Man to appear!

The script by Nakkiah Lui seemed to pose various points of view.  There was the predictable jab at Andrew Bolt but were also balanced with some inner soul searching from within.  I think this script could be tightened to make it even funnier and more poignant.

Set and Costume Design by Eugyeen Teh was terrific with his playful designs.  The cardboard cut outs were a highlight with the beach tent, surfboard, dressing room mirror etc.  The white stage had a surtitles board above which named locations or provided additional information.  This was another fun addition to the design.  The main proscenium arch moved upstage smoothly to open up the stage area.

The open wing area on each side was an interesting choice seeing where the Stage Managers would move signs etc.  This was distracting and took away our focus from the main stage.

The costumes were functional and also grossly tacky when appropriate.  The full body unitards with hand prints attached were explicit and fun. 

The burning "Sorry" sign alerted me to where the exits were located.  I worried about safety and knew that it would meet safety regulations.  This also raised a level of emotional connection to the sign - if a sorry is genuine and burns inside of the person giving the apology.

Lighting Design by Paul Jackson was sharp and created a sense of space and location.

There were some very funny moments with the boomerang thrown out one exit and returning via another exit.   The emu dance was well staged by Movement Director Ben Graetz.

The final dance sequence by Ginny Jones was interesting as the other characters were all cleaning up. I told my partner this afterwards and he agreed it was a subtle message of how certain races do the low paid jobs of cleaning, driving cabs etc.  This final trash message was as if the white man had caused all of this trash and here was a white girl dancing to claim not only her identity but her territory.

I thought overall the actors worked with a fair script to maximise its messages.

Overall I gave this production a 6.5/10.

Saturday 17 December 2016

Reefer Madness, RL Productions, Chapel Off Chapel, Tuesday November 29th 2016

"Reefer Madness",  RL Productions, Chapel Off Chapel, Tuesday November 29th 2016

"Reefer Madness" was presented at Chapel Off Chapel by RL Productions.  We saw the Tuesday November 29th 2016 performance.

For those new to my blog I write about the holistic experience of attending the theatre. I buy my own tickets. So if you want a re-telling of the story please refer to the links for further information or for further insights.  Note, that I may provide different links for repeated main words or phrases.  I write for my memories of what I have seen, and is more of a stream of consciousness.

Buying tickets for "Reefer Madness"via the Chapel Off Chapel website was easy enough.  They offer good value tickets for lesser known works and usually with reasonable quality casts.

The programme for "Reefer Madness" was $5.00 and very good value.  I am impressed that they are one of the few shows at Chapel Off Chapel to heed my feedback and print the year of the show on the cover of their programme.  The song list is laid out in a legible font.  Some of the cast and crew biographies need to be edited to provide a more mature outline of their experience.

Sadly there is only one small paragraph that mentions RL Productions.  I found their website and Facebook page.  We had seen their production of "Crossroads" and were very impressed with it.

Stephen Wheat directed "Reefer Madness" and at times it shone.  Otherwise, it dragged and was not as funny as it could have been.  The humour was laboured and very cartoon-esque with no resemblance of any movie characters from the 1930's.  The cast tried too hard with the material.

My favourite moments were the Placard Girl played by Priscilla Stavou as this was the role that was most in keeping with the era.  Sometimes the placards were shown in such a fleeting or brief fashion and were missed by some members of the audience. I loved how she was shy in her delivery and this could have been developed to show her aspirations to become a a Follies girl, or more vaudevillian in their delivery.  I yearned for more "Follies" or vaudevillian delivery.  (Think "Ziegfeld Follies" and "Ziegfeld Girl" movies!)

My other favourite aspect was the choreography by Yvette Lee.  There was a lot of work involved and the cast moved with precision and accuracy.  The opening of Act Two was particularly strong choreographically with the various modes of transport incorporated into the movements: driving, running, sailing, train, flying etc.  This was assisted by the cartoon-cut-out props to add to the humour. The quick scene with the rickshaw was a highlight, particularly with Ed Deganos doing the hard leg work.  This whole scene reminded me of "She's a nut" from "On the 20th Century".

I also loved the "Dick Tracy" style poses with the performers in their trench-coats.  Yvette Lee is a choreographer to watch in the future with her eye for detail and her ability to train all the performers to a very slick and competent level.

Yvette Lee has choreographed one of the tightest ensembles I have seen in years for a musical.

Singing varied in ability.  The two leads let us down with the flat singing during the Act One final duet of "Reefer Madness".

The ensemble finale was the richest harmonies heard.  Sadly we did not hear enough of these harmonies.

The transitions between scenes were laboured and needed to be snappy.

Lighting Design by Jason Bovaird captured the essence of the show.  His lighting was most effective in the chase scene using the strobe effects.  It is a shame that the staging during the strobe sequence did not maximise the effect by slowing down the action a bit more to enhance the humour of a silent movie. At times I was frustrated that the lighting design was marred by the lateness of some of the lighting cues.  I do not think this was intentional.  I am curious if the first entrance of Jimmy Harper missing his spot was intentional.  I admired Ben Adams who played Jimmy Harper for holding his stance - so forthright during the Lecturer's introductions as it set the tone for his character.

The sound at times was clunky with the cues not being picked up and we heard a few words at normal volume before the microphones kicked in.

The band played well under the direction of David Wisken, but sounded very electronic.  It would have been good to have more of a 1930's sound.

It was a fun night but could have been funnier.  The cast and director need to watch more 1930's films to capture the honesty and naivety of their performances to capture the era, rather than trying to send it up.  I have watched many 1930's films and can be instantly transported to a time and place.  Here it was as if I was watching a group of very talented performers trying way too hard to be funny.

The actors needed to find sincerity and a connection with their characters rather than playing two dimensional solo performances.  This would have made it funnier.

There were no bad performances, but there were stand out moments.  I felt there was a lack of connection between many of the characters.  The show seemed to be an array of many soloists showcasing their moments - except during the choreographed dance sequences where they came together as an ensemble.

Jimmy Harper was played by Ben Adams as the young man who becomes addicted to marijuana.  He played many levels of his mania and mostly sang well.  His character was the most believable from a 1930's film perspective, though I would have liked more connection with the other characters.

Mary Lane played by Grace O'Donnell-Clancy as a larger than life character.  Though cartoon-esque in style both the main leads needed more realism to make it funnier.

The Act One final duet between which was flat by both.

Sally played by Phoebe Coupe, reminded me a little of Bette Davis from "Whatever Happened to Baby Jane" or Gloria Swanson as  Norma Desmond from "Sunset Boulevard".

The "Spaghetti Western" delayed violence between Jack Stone (Jared Bryan) and Mae (Rosa McCarty) obtained consistent laughs.  Sadly this type of delayed sequence was not used during other opportunities to provide for more sight gags by other characters.

Stephen McDowell ably played Ralph.  His simple make-up and physicality gave his character more realism.

Sally's Baby was brilliantly sung and acted by Alex Thompson.

James Cutler as the Lecturer played many small roles throughout.  The opening sequence sets the tone for the show, though it needs some tweaking to maximise the effect.  He grew as a performer with his other characters.  James Cutler  sang well and channelled Robert Preston as Harold Hill warning students with "The Truth".  Some may question the relevance with the conman antics of Harold Hill warning residents with the song "Trouble" from "The Music Man".

Ed Deganos as Jesus was hanging on a crucifix attached to a removalist's trolley.  Visually a strong joke and he made the most of it.

Seth Drury as an ensemble member channelled the Keystone Cops with his height and dead pan gaze. More could have been done to channel the movement of the Keystone Cops during chase scene.

The costumes were fun, particularly the men's jacquard socks and v-neck vest looked terrific to capture the 1930's, the ladies' costumes were a little too contemporary but still gave the impression it was a high school production.

Set design by Simon Coleman was simple and effective allowing for the dual role of being a High School production -  and a show within a show.  The little touches of the red curtain not fully closing and the window shutters not closing fully may not have been intentional - but they worked to highlight the high school set construction.

There were so many contemporary references made within Yvette Lee's choreography.  I liked the Matthew Bourne "Swan Lake" triangle in the finale and the Bob Fosse hands from "Pippin" when the reefers were all presented through the red curtain.  The zombie type characters referenced all of the sci-fi television shows and had aspects of "Carrie" the musical.

Sadly the sight lines in Row F impede the view in the downstage area.  There needs to be a metre gap between the front row and the stage to allow for a better view.  It is not just me as two couples behind me had to move to empty side seats for a better view!

"Reefer Madness" was written by Kevin Murphy and Dan Studney and preceded the brilliant "Heathers"  which has a book by Kevin Murphy and Laurence O'Keefe.  It was terrific to see this earlier work to compare how the writing had grown musically and dramatically.

I look forward to seeing more work from this company.  It excites me to see so much talent in Melbourne presenting so many rare works.

Overall this production obtains a 6.5/10.





Thursday 15 December 2016

The Gathering, Vic Theatre, 45 Downstairs, Thursday December 8th 2016

The Gathering, Vic Theatre, 45 Downstairs, Thursday December 8th 2016


"The Gathering" was presented by Vic Theatre in Association with Kin Collaborative Inc at  45 Downstairs on Thursday December 8th 2016.

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Buying tickets for the "The Gathering"  was easy though I nearly missed it and only realised due to the Herald Sun article on Tuesday November 22nd 2016 that it was a new musical.  I love to support new Australian works as does my partner.

The tickets are reasonably priced and thankfully offer discounts for M.E.A.A. members as many venues do not offer such a discount.  My partner is a senior and could not obtain a discount as he is not a pensioner.  We are not complaining as we like to support young talent of such a good standard.

The boss office guy is always such a hoot and has so much personality and really brings a welcoming vibe to the 45 Downstairs venue.

Waiting in the queue I observed the poster and the flyer for the show.  A striking image that makes sense after seeing the show.  The poster reminded me of the "iceberg theory" image and the underlying tensions or background stories of the characters.  The dates are shown on the reverse of the flyer but not the year.  Historically I want a record to recall this show was in 2016 and they need to be on the posters and flyers.

"The Gathering" was suitably staged on this steamy summer night as we learnt that this was the time and setting for the show.  We arrived just before 7.30 pm as the traffic was so bad.

Signs with large print were displayed on the walls asking patrons to turn off their mobile phones.  A great touch though sadly some audience members had to be "Twanking" right until the show began. The older gentlemen on stage right was the worst and continued to do so during the opening song. How rude of him as it is so distracting.

Sadly programmes had sold out.  MMMMM "Not happy Jan" as I like to read about the show and get some background of the performers before I watch a show.  I enjoy recognising different performers or creative talent to be able to compare and watch their growth in the industry.  I like to keep all of my programmes in chronological order with any newspaper articles and brochures as a holistic collection for theatre history.

After the show, I was pleased that the box office guy introduced me to two of the producers and one offered to email me a programme.  "The smallest action is better than the biggest intention".  I was most impressed as he saved me having to ask if he could do so.  That is what I mean - so many people put young people down -but these young adults have such insight into how to progress their careers. They really appreciate that the next conversation could open up doors for them.  That is what I really admired about Joel Granger when we bumped into him at "Reefer Madness" he introduced himself after we congratulated him on his work in "Titanic".   We were so pleased to learn that he was to be in "The Gathering".


Sadly I have not received a copy of the programme and do not know if the song list was included.


Costumes by someone unknown were appropriate to differentiate each character.  The costumes in the chest were also important to support the story.


Note:  I never did receive a copy of the programme.


The following was copied from the 45 Downstairs website:



We took our seats and found some in the second back row of the central section.

Upon entry to the theatre I was hit with an immediate atmosphere created by the set and Joel Granger as Tom who was vacuuming the mixed carpet off cuts and dusting the table.  It reminded me of "Rent".

The stage reminded me of The Why Not Theatre in Carlton from 1975-1976 with the array of carpet off cuts.  It was a terrific segue in to the show to create the realism of his living conditions.  We, as the audience were like flies on the wall.  I did not want to walk on his carpet to get to our seats as I felt like I was invading his space.

I used the cast list from the 45 Downstairs website and the Vic Theatre website as my references when trying to complete my notes.  I have copied the cast list from the 45 Downstairs website at the end of my notes.

Set design by  (insert name here)  involved a round table, chairs and an esky centre stage.  On stage right was a large recliner type chair and a tall lamp stand.  Upstage were boxes and various items. The set design was appropriate for the venue and for genre of the show as it immediately set the tone for a new arrival to a grungy apartment.

Props by (insert name here) were mainly bottles, paper cups, boxes and cases.  Mobile phones were used as torches reminiscent of "Hernandos's Hide-a-way" from "The Pajama Game". The props were used realistically within the constraints of the set and the story.

Direction by (insert name here)  was adequate though the depth of characterisation and interactions between the characters was limited by the script.  

The staging for the different locations was terrific and created simply by moving some furniture and enhanced by the lighting design.    As I write this I do not have the programme and assume someone was responsible for the choreography or movement direction.  The choreography or movement was appropriate for the show without being too razzle-dazzle.  Sadly I cannot name them to congratulate them on their staging.

Lighting design by (insert name here) created a sense of location and I appreciate the limitations of the venue.  The lighting was quite effective except for the final bonfire sequence which was a let down because it was meant to support the story.

The book needs work but is very promising. I have seen worse scripts presented in development at the New York Fringe and on Off Broadway.

Performances were quite good while some stood out.  The gay guy in black and the hippy girlfriend both had a solid characters throughout.  

Joel Granger's Tom was suppressed and I longed for some backstory interaction with his foster sister or friends to create more of a build-up.   At the two performances of "Titanic" we attended  his singing was sensational, while he hit a few bung notes in "The Gathering" he kept his emotional connection to his character.  He did not flinch and this created a reality to his character. I enjoyed his contrast in his restraint to his impulsive displays of fight and flight (save the staging of the fights).  He made the most of what he had to work with, though I yearned for more from the script and score to showcase what this fine performer is capable of.  He is capable of taking it to another level.

Tom's male friend Joe was played by Daniel Cosgrove and had a more Ocker strine to his voice and was not as secure in his singing.  His connection with girl friend Daisy played by Hannah Sullivan McInerny was quite strong in creating a bond that would eventually break.  Their interactions and reveals in the "Secret" sequence were the most realistic and created the much needed tension.

The fight scenes were very twee and needed more tension in the movement direction to show us the relationship history of the characters.  The pushing and shoving was childish, and any arguments were forgotten within ten seconds of occurring.  These spats needed more festering in both the script and the direction.  I know these writers could give more.

Hannah Sullivan McInerny as Daisy the hippy girlfriend. Hannah Sullivan McInerny was suited to the part visually and vocally. Her costume was appropriate and simple.  Ironically her alternative character seemed the most grounded in the production.  Her performance really stood out for me and it is such a pleasure to see how performers grow with each new challenge.

I have seen Olivia Charalambous previously in "Dogfight" and here she played Mia.  I know how meaty her performance can be with her depth of understanding.  Her singing in "The Gathering" was pleasant though her character at times jumped without any transition to her next action.   I think her performance was partially due to the jerkiness of the script at times.  Her scene when finding Tom revealed what she is capable of as an actress who can be honest and truthful.

Tom's foster sister Kelly was played by Shannen Alyce Quan was a strong, confident and assertive young lady.  She sang well and her character seemed to lose some of the self assurance as the script progressed.  I yearned for a duet or a montage with her and Tom as youngster's growing up.  It would have been interesting to see the character's playing dress ups or "Secret" as kids to counter point the adult action.

The first entrance of the gay guy Luke was played by Daniel Assetta.  His arrival was unwelcome by Tom and needed more dramatic electricity and stand off.  Daniel Assetta kept this character flamboyant and consistent throughout.  He made the most of the script and I longed for more tension between him and Tom.  Maybe some backstory or time shifting interaction between Tom and Luke could have suspended the tension.

When Tom asked people to leave it was unrealistic from a script perspective.  It seemed corny and was too blunt in the writing. There was a lack of keeping people apart and any tension built up was immediately dissipated and as such made the scene fizzle.  With development the tensions could be built.


The opening of the "Secrets" sequence lacked any build up and so I found it cringe worthy in the writing when the first two characters revealed their secrets.  There needed to be more hesitation, pause, courage, confidence building, trust and anticipation in this sequence.  This could have been achieved with a slower build up and musically could have been very interesting.   Nothing was at stake between the characters and no tension to keep us on edge. The actual secrets revealed by each character were appropriate - it was the linking together that seemed episodic and too much like a soap opera's tight 30 minutes structure.  It was as if I was watching someone scrolling through their Facebook page and dismissing the next comment by a character.  

The best aspect of the "Secrets" sequence was the reveal between the guy and the hippy girlfriend.

Music and lyrics by Belinda Jenkin and Will Hannagan and were not as bad as one reviewer stated. This is a young person's story and as such spoke in a language attuned to their ears.    Both Belinda Jenkin and Will Hannagan have an ear for the younger person's voice.

Diction could have been improved as some important lyrics were completely swallowed and we lost the logic or reason for an action.  My partner and myself could not work out a few of the lyrics due to the diction.  I wanted to understood some of the lyrics at times. 

At times "The Gathering" reminded me of "The Woman In Black" as horror play or film.  The sound effects used were haunting and adequate.  With more resources these could be made more disturbing. The interactions between the characters dismissed the sounds while this could have created more tension.  I longed to see the characters playing as children to counter-point their adult interactions.

I look forward to more work by Belinda Jenkin and Will Hannagan.  I do not know whether it is worth tinkering with "The Gathering" and sometimes you have to move on and let go of a particular work. If this work is any indication of what they are capable of - then I know they will deliver even more sophisticated works.  

The duet between the foster sister Shannen Alyce Quan (Kelly) and Luke was too long and was hard to understand the lyrics at times.  Maybe it felt too long due to the lack of diction.

The music was pleasant and it did not remind me of other show tunes rehashed.  This is important as usually I start recognising themes or songs from other shows.  The originality is a compliment. Though the music was not memorable and needed a stronger thematic thread, it is just off the edge of recognition and recall.

The staging of the finale reminded me of "Assassins" by MTC that was performed at the George Fairfax Studio.

The harmonies were good and I wanted to hear more of this ensemble's capabilities.

Oh yes remember our resident "Twanker"?  The older gentlemen sitting on stage right was the worst and actually had the audacity to check his phone about four times during the show.  He is lucky he was not closer to me.  I was not going to disturb these young people's efforts.  Then the old guy has to wipe tears at the end.  Really?  Did you actually watch these fine performers?  It was so distracting mate as I pay money to watch a show and not get the peripheral flash of your phone.  Maybe you were a part of the lighting design!

Thankfully the younger generation had the decency to turn off their phones.

"The Gathering" was presented with enthusiasm and was a terrific showcase of a work in progress.

The website for Vic Theatre is terrific in providing me with some information and I hope they maintain their knowledge base via their archives.  Sadly when I take the time to create these links many organisations delete the information down the track.  I hope that Vic Theatre maintains their archives as they are a company to watch for the future.


Overall I gave "The Gathering" a 6.5/10.  My partner gave it the same score.


Five years in the making, The Gathering is a new musical by Will Hannagan and Belinda Jenkin. Fresh from a development season at the New York Music Theatre Festival, it returns to Melbourne for an all too short season at fortyfivedownstairs.
The Gathering is presented with the support of City of Melbourne.
Cast
Joel Granger (Tom)
Olivia Charalambous (Mia)
Daniel Assetta (Luke)
Shannen Alyce Quan (Kelly)
Daniel Cosgrove (Joe)
Hannah Sullivan McInerny (Daisy)
 Co-Composers and Creators
Belinda Jenkin is a singer, actor and writer. She is a 2015 graduate of NIDA (Diploma of Musical THeatre). Before NIDA she also studied a Diploma of Arts in Popular Music and Performance and in 2012 travelled to New York to study at America’s Musical Theatre Conservatorium CAP21. She has performed professionally in stage and screen and written new works that have been presented in both Australia and New York.

Will Hannagan is a theatre-maker, songwriter and pop-cabaret performer based in Melbourne. Past works include, Gaga V Assange, Affluenza, Pop Press and Until Tomorrow. His works have appeared in numerous festivals and abroad. He holds a degree in English and French from the University of Melbourne.